Thursday, July 16, 2009

Mysteries

When I was a young boy
And my feet made of clay
I remember meeting her
On that clear summer day

I was with my best friend
We had come for the band
They played my favorite song
When I saw her stand

Did you see her
Did you see her
Standing out of the crowd
Did you hear her
Did you hear her
Singing out loud
Can anyone tell me
Who is this girl I see?
Part the veil of this new found
Mystery

She sang like a siren
She looked like a venus
She shone as a beacon
Across the gulf between us

Her mind was taller
Her neck was strong
Her ways seemed higher
And her thoughts fell long

Did you see her
Did you see her
Standing out of the crowd
Did you hear her
Did you hear her
Unravel thoughts out loud
Can anyone tell me
Who is this girl I see?
Part the veil of this deepening
Mystery

But her heart was heavy
Too heavy for us to bare
She made herself noble
Because inside she was scared
Scared of trusting again
After tasting that hell
So instead she rose up
Locked deep in her shell

Did you see her
Did you see her
Looking so proud
Did you hear her
Did you hear her
Crying out loud
Can anyone tell me
Who is she really?
Does she even know
Her own mystery

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Eh, personally didn't like how this one came out... I think its partially because I wrote the first half, knowing where I was going with it, then I went to sleep and woke up, thinking I would finish it real quick, only to realize I had forgotten where I was going with it... so yeah, turned out kinda blah in my opinion...

2 comments:

  1. I think it turned out beautifully!

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