Friday, November 7, 2008

Miss Kathleen's Defense

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  1. AnonymousNovember 10, 2008 at 12:12 AM

    huh. didn't see that one coming!!!

    well done :).

    i'm having a hard time picturing it as a toaster, though...

    but i really do love it!!! i'm picturing this dismembered body all over a kitchen only to realize it's pieces of a toaster. so good! the best line in the whole thing?

    "As usual I was at his home, for really it wasn’t the Radcliffe’s anymore, it was really his."

    I love how you convey her growing hatred for the Radcliff's in conjunction with her growing obsession with "him".

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  2. AnonymousNovember 10, 2008 at 9:38 PM

    lol! Nicely done Muht and Thirk! Next time you talk to Jean tell him I say hi ... and thet he might consider getting another Muse who is not so morbid... like Sarcasm or something. You know, for good measure.

    Debbie

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  3. AnonymousApril 17, 2009 at 11:19 AM

    Gee...!!!

    Mmmmmm....well done....tension building....and then...wham..!!

    Climax......

    Awesome!

    Jacques

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