So you want to know more about the story...

Well, tonight I finally got some feed back on the story. Apperantly people liked it (just for that you get to be in it and have good parts) but were confused by some of the details I ommitted. So here is the basic plot synopsis. And no. This is not part of the series I talked about before, this story is the one I left a small segment of below. Anyway here goes.

The Story
(So yeah, no title yet, but hey if you help me get it I'll acknowledge you in the front of the book)

The plot centers around three young(13-15) kids who come from a small village in the mountains bordered on one side by a place known as the Black Forest. None who wonder in ever return alive. They chase after a small girl form the village (who in turn chases a stray puppy she found) into the Black Forest. They fall asleep and when they wake up they are mysteriously at the other end. They find themselves in a world that is torn between the old icey ways, the modern firey innovations, and the mysterious viridian woods. At the lead of the old ways is the circle of witches. They each inflict some kind of malice on the world, and are all desperately trying to find something known as the "Treasure of the Forest". Contrary to them and their dictatorial rule, the modern movement is spearheaded by the Wreath confederacy. They are a group of human nations that serround the Bay of Bho and the innovative capital of the "world". Then there is the woods. The woods is called many things. The Black Forest, the Dark Woods, The Forbidden Forest, The Cursed Woods, The Emerald Band, and the Arborex. The Woods is basically a forest that serrounds the entire world. It use to cover it all but now it is only a ring around the main center. Everything except the begining of the story happens within the boundry made by these woods. Even when cut of by the ocean they keep going on the islands and the continents. This is very important. The Forest King once ruled the world but it was because of the "Treasure of the Forest" that the witches are now in control, however they have their limits and they need the treasure to go past those.

So basically, the three kids travel through the whole world looking for the treasure before teh witches find it. The problem is it hasn't been seen for 14 years. And no one seems to know what it looks like.

So thats the main plot idea. Other characters come in later and I will go over some of them soon. There is a very complicated story with the villains and I'll go over that too. And then of course there are many plot twists around each cornor.

So hopefully I have whetted your appatite. I'll also post a few more random sections I have written. Please keep in mind that these are still just freewrites/first drafts. The final product will definatly be shiny. :)