Tuesday, December 9, 2008

The Cruel Anvil

The Cruel Anvil

O how the anvil weighs down,
Its chains around Cupid’s target
But no Eros here can abound
For fear of the eyes that mark it

The heart wails of the tear deep
As bright red life spills free
What caused this rent in nightless sleep?
What has broken so utterly?

Words of the soul and whispers dark
No voice ever to be found
Secrets hid deep in the heart
There wordlessly, eternally bound

The anvil heavy, the secret kept
What ask you me for its name
My lips have vowed, my eyes wept
Never spoken it shall remain

Press me not, do not inquire
I shall not consent, will not reveal
This leaden anvil, Orphian desire
Ask no more, for lies my soul kill

O Venus cruel and ever vexing
O Cupid why torment me night and day?
O Muses guard my lips’ stretching
May my meaning not fly away.

Monday, December 8, 2008

The Day at the Beach

The Day at the Beach

Everything is dark and humid and tight. There is a low rumbling sound coming from all around and the walls and the roof and the floor I’m lying on shake and shutter ever so often. I bounce with the motion of the floor and bump against something wicker and woven. After what seems like an eternity the noise ebbs and then stops, with one awful penultimate shudder as I suddenly fly towards one of the cool metal walls.

Then there was light. Bright and beautiful light that streamed in like cascading waterfalls of brightness and joy. I lay there, and saw clearly now the picnic basket beside me and the beach ball at my side. And I saw his face, bright and eager as he looked over the rim of the metallic mouth into the trunk where I lay. And ever so slightly behind him I saw another figure, obscured by the light, standing strong and tall behind him.

“Poppa! Poppa! Can I fly my kite now?” he asks with an excited high pitch peal of laughter from his throat.

“Yes. You may. Go over there, further along the shoreline. The wind will pick him up high there.”

His small clean hand reaches down and takes me firmly, yet comfortingly, eyes shining with anticipation and fun. We run down the sandy dunes, past the long flat grasses and the driftwood logs that lie scattered across the beach like bodies. His small feet kick up sand and shell alike as he ran faster and faster, holding me up so I can feel the air rushing over me already. I tremble, not from the breeze, but from excitement. This is it. Today I will fly. This is what I was made to do.

The Father holds me while he walks away slightly, strong hands positioning me just right for the breeze. He has the same twinkle in his grey eyes, the same as the boy. And then with a roaring laugh he calls for his son to run. He does, and as he does I feel the tug at my heart, where the string lies firmly, and I begin to go up.

I rise and rise and go higher and higher, a few twist and turns on my way there. I soar stronger and stronger, and then suddenly feel the winds catch me and I shoot up like a rocket. He woops down below and his father smiles proudly as they watch me climb into the skies. My sails taught and full I know this is what I was made to do.

“Careful son.” I hear him say. “Give him some slack on the line. If you don’t let him go where he wants to, he’ll be torn apart by the wind.”

“Like that Father?” he asks making some adjustments.

“Perfect. Now just make sure he doesn’t go further out over the water, otherwise he’ll get sucked into the storm.”

I have stopped listening to them down there. I’m flying and am going higher and higher as he gives me more line. I’m soaring like an eagle now, reaching to breach the veil of the cerulean heavens and see the stars. But as I climb and reach, I feel the string at my heart pull again. It’s the boy and his father. They’re trying to keep me back, stop me from doing everything I can. Angrily, I pull on the string, the boy remains steadfast. I pull more, frustrated and seething at my tether. Then it happened. The string snapped with a twang and I was free.

“My kite!”

“There, there son. Its alright. Hopefully it will fall down again. Go and gather its string until then.”

I no longer care to listen. I am flying. I am truly free. I can do anything I want. I climb higher and higher, past the first layer of clouds and into the vast kingdom of behemoth white monsters that soar past me. They change subtly and slowly, rolling and churning as I dodge and weave between them. I laugh as I think, this is why they kept me on the string, to stop me from seeing all this!

As I fly further and further out over the aquamarine waves capped in white, the cloud castle grow larger and larger, changing shades now from simply whites to all shades of grey and silver. The clouds begin to rumble and mumble as they speak to each other and to me. I soar on the zephyrs closer to them, to hear what they have to say.

But they are not truly my friends. They beat their rage against me and make me burden down and heavy with rain. As I sag lower and lower, their thunderous roars shake me and their bright bolts of anger break my once proud heart. And as I begin to fall from the sky, my once beautiful white sail smoldering and black, I stretch out and try to catch a breeze, but there is none to carry me. And so I fall into the cold sea, and drift through the cold currents.

My broken arms that held my sail so high, my broken heart with the small piece of string left on it, all go tumbling through the salty sea as darkness once again enfolds my face. Strange things pass past me, in me, and through me, but I can think about is the boy and his father and the sadness as they watched me fly away.

In my despair and anguish, I feel something rough scrape across my back. I open my eyes and see vaguely, the golden yellow sand that his young feet had once run across so briskly, kicking it up into the sky. Then, as the wave crashes me against it and runs me across it, I finally come to a stop. The water pulls back and here I lie. No breeze to take me no current to shake me. I lie and in my broken heart I cry.

And then I hear a cry.

“Poppa! Poppa! Look! Look over there! Its my kite! Its come back!”

I dare not hope. I dare not look. But as soft small hands pick me up, I do, and then I can barely stand my joy. They have found me! They have saved me! I’m going to be alright! I’m going home. As he picks me up, I see something I hadn’t seen before. His small hands have cuts on them. Cuts from where the string had been held when I had pulled away. As if reading my mind, he smiles at me and then his father before speaking.

“Poppa! I’m so glad my kite is back! I can’t wait to go back home and fix him! I have a new cross piece to place at his heart and I’ll paint him bright red. He’ll look as good as new!”

“Good my son. I’m so glad you got your kite back. When we get home we’ll get some ice cream to celebrate!”

And so I sit here, on his lap as I see the world pass by me in a blur, strange things I have never seen before. The car still shudders and shakes as we drive back, but I am content in my savior’s hands who holds me ever so gently as he and his father talk about all the things that await me at this place called home. I cannot help but smile, because once I was lost, but now I am found. Once I was dead, but now I am truly alive.

Thursday, December 4, 2008

Tea Cups and Mountain Tops

Afternoon tea in the large house by the lake and the two gentlemen sat down with their papers and books. The first took a sip of his cup and commented upon the weather and the season and the view from his room. The other smiled cordially, sipped too of the tea, and spoke of the house and the gardens and the village by the lake. As they spoke and they ate and they sipped of their cups, said one to the other:

“My good fellow. This morning was terrible. The air was so cold, the clouds rolled in and painted the sky a rather sickly grey.”

“Is that so?”

“Yes! Then it began to rain and I was awoken rudely by the unceasing twitter of birds outside my window as they sought shelter from it. It took the servants forever to get the firewood for my room’s fire and then it was soaked so that they could not light it until it had dried.”

“I am sorry to hear of your ill morning, friend.”

“And how did yours go, pray tell. Hopefully not entirely as horrible as mine?”

“Oh, no. Quite the contrary. I arose early this morning, while the sky was still black and was privileged to see Orion’s belt came into perfect alignment with Sirius. A most infrequent occurrence.”

“Hmm. But still, to rise so early must truly have been vexing, was it not?”

“Not by any means. For after watching the glorious ballet of the stars, I had one of the servants take me upon the route to the very top of the mountain behind the old house.”

“Well I pity you friend. It must have been a horrid climb in this weather.”

“No, indeed. It was for sure a challenge, but the magnificent view of the other mountain tops was worth the climb to be sure. And not just that, but then the clouds rolled in before sunrise, the same ones that were the cause of your consternation, and formed a pure white blanket beneath us, which caught the light of the morning sunrise in its many pockets and folds.”

“I see. But what of the rains? Surely that was not entirely pleasing to you?”

“As we descended the rains began, but only slightly, and we chanced upon a grove of trees in which we could take shelter. It was some wild and free dryadic orchard, with apples and plums and wild grape vines all about. We ate our fill and then drank from a nearby stream of pure water from the snowy mountain’s veil.”

By now the first gentleman had grown silent while the other had become more and more passionate about his adventure that morning. One tea cup lay forgotten, the other was filled continuously by it’s sullen user.

“But I must apologies for the fire wood my friend, for that was my fault entirely. You see as we were coming down the path, by way of the small dyke that holds back the lake, we came upon a hole. I stopped it up as best as I could while the servant ran and took the first sturdy wood he could lay hands on. Unfortunately it was the firewood next to our abode. We held it in place until the stonemason could come and repair the gap, and that’s why your logs this morning were soaked. I hope it wasn’t too much of a bother.”

“Hmm. No. None whatsoever.”

Just then a servant of the lodge came up and spoke regally, “Excuse me sir, but the owner of the house and the major of the small village below are in the main parlor. They wish to speak to you about your heroic deed this morning. I believe they mentioned something of a statue in your honor.”

“Well friend, I enjoyed the tea. Mayhap I will see you again. Farewell.”

“Farewell.” Said the other gentleman as he rung for his servant.

A small fat man appeared, out of breath and with a slight rosy hue to his nose.

“Ah. Felix. I think tomorrow morning I will take a stroll up the mountain. Awaken me before sunrise.”

“Um. Yes sir. Pardon me sir, but you do know that it’ll still be dark?”

The gentleman simple sat his tea cup down and walked out of the tea room. Outside, the clouds had parted and a rainbow could be seen in the heavens over the white veiled mountain. Birds sang lustily at the beauty of the afternoon sky as the blue of the lake reflected the clear blueness of the alpine sky.

Wednesday, December 3, 2008

NEW Chapter 2

Chapter 2

Nicholas awoke with a start. The children were all outside lined up waiting for their ration of barley meal and water. The sky was a livid grey with streaks of oily smoke coming from the south. Nicholas felt the fear begin to well up inside of him. He yelled when he saw the large ominous birds fly out from the woods. There were three and their smoky black eyes were watching him. He began to run but no matter how hard he sprinted he didn’t go anywhere.

“They’re coming!” he yelled as his eyes opened.

He was in the dark tent. Several boys moaned and called sleepily in anger at his loud disturbance. From the depths of the dark stuffy tent a pillow came down hard on Nicholas’ face as an agitated voice said,

“Loudmouth! Will you stop kicking me!” The boy next to Nicholas complained.

“S-sorry.” Nicholas said feeling the glare coming from the rest of the tent.

“Just go back to sleep. You were just dreaming.” said the other boy with a yawn.

Nicholas lay in the tent but he couldn’t shake the feeling that the birds were still watching them. In his mind’s eye he could see the three large oily black owls with their smoking eyes and horned heads as they sat in the grass just watching. He shuddered and got up, slipping out of the tent into the morning light.

The fog still covered the entire area like a thick woolen blanket trying to smother all life. The line between heaven and earth was gone and in the endless white there seemed to be shades of silver and grey prowling. The sandy clearing where the large monoliths stood was an island in the sea of long golden grass which stood motionless in the windless morning air. Nicholas listened to the far off call of some bird and the croak of a frog before he started moving.

He walked to the large monolith on its side where the foodline had been the previous night. In a hollow in the stone surface a pool of rain water had collected and reflected his wearied and tired face. His deep brown eyes stared wearily back up at him, while his curly dark brown hair looked like a large tangled bush or shrub. He washed his face with the water from the small pool when he heard someone behind him.

“Hmm. It’s a bit early to be up.” It was the Leader.

Nicholas turned and said, “…I couldn’t sleep…”

“That’s alright. A lot of children couldn’t sleep being away from their parents. Don’t worry in a day or two you’ll be back with them safe and sound.” the Leader said, attempting a rough smile on his dark features.

Nicholas turned obtusely and said, “No, I won’t. I don’t have any parents.”

The Leader’s smile faded and he walked over to where Nicholas stood. Then leaning in he asked, “And what’s your name son?”

“Nicholas. Nicholas of Luca. I am the servant of the village elder.”

“I see. And tell me, Nicholas of Luca, do you want to be his servant for the rest of your life?” a strange light in the Leader’s eyes.

“No. But I don’t have any choice. I don’t have anywhere else to go.” Nicholas said sulking.

“Well, if you’re a good worker and a fast learner, we may have an opening in our… group for you.” He grinned out of the corner of his mouth.

“What does your group do?” Nicholas asked pensively.

“Hahaha!” the man leaned back his thickly braided head and laughed heartily, “The better question is ‘what do we not do’! Right now, we are protecting something that needs to be kept very secret and safe. You could say we’re like special world traveling guardians.”

“Really!?! You guys get to travel all over the world?” Nicholas asked with eyes wide.

“That’s right. We have an opening left if you’d like to join.” He said smiling warmly, “After all, we orphans need to look out for each other.”

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In a distant land the morning sun was also rising over the choppy icy sea, the green grey waves of salty water crashing against each other as the Seakings made war beneath the depths. Above the raging waves a small craft creaked up the mountains of water and raced into the valleys. On board a dirty, greasy looking fat man was retching over the side cursing his bad luck.

He wanted to pull his deck of black cards out right then and there and freeze the whole ocean so he could just walk across. But that would require walking, not his most loved pastime. Besides, she had instructed him not to use any magic until he was in Teaul.

He snorted to himself as he thought about the woman in the black gossamer cape. She wasn’t so tough. Sure she could do some tricks with her cape and with his mind, but that had been when he wasn’t ready. If he had really been fighting her will, he would not have fallen so easily. She couldn’t tell him when and where he could use his cards, he thought angrily.

With contempt he opened the seal of the black scroll she had slipped in his pocket to give to the Vestal in Teaul. He started coughing again and had to steady himself on the careening ship before he could read the curving elegant handwriting. As he read he spat a few times to get the taste of vomit out of his mouth.

“Unto the Chief Vestal in Residence on Teaul,

My sister, I send to you the vessel for your deceptive plot. The pieces are moving across the board and soon your part will be required. This creature should do nicely in the role you have planned. If he does not fit your requirements or if you have already found a replacement than feel free to sacrifice him to the Void. Hopefully this one will last longer than the others.

Until the next full moon
High Matron in Sylvania”

The fat man’s hands were shaking as he reread the words. He felt a cold sweat begin to cover his body and he could not stop himself from swallowing several times, causing his engorged double chins to wobble and sway. He wished the nauseating sea sickness would return and replace the terrible weight of dread he now felt in his stomach. He slid down against the railing of the ship and covered his head with his hands.

“What am I going to do?” He said despondently as he smelled his reeking breath curling about him. “If I run, she’ll find me and kill me for sure, but if I stay they might sacrifice me to the Void. Either way I’m a dead man. I should never have gotten involved with the Circle.”

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The early morning light shone through the large columns of black smoke that billowed up towards the sky. A light snow began to fall on the remains of the village of Luca. A small figure, a man bent over double with a rat like face and four yellow teeth in his mouth skittered as he ran between the large craters that had been houses before. He bowed several times as he neared the ominous presence of his master.

“What is it Lurq?” The armored one said without turning, the glowing eyes staring into the large crater surrounded by concentric cracks in the stone ground.

“Mye mystirr, Aye feer de veelijers have fled eento de mounteens. De troops could not peersue dem, oh crusheer of skulls.”

The armored one turned and raised the large glowing mace, the light sending odd ripples across the silver chainmail and large horned helmet. The shriveled man made several whimpered pleas before the large mace swung down. The force was so great that a wave of dust flew in all directions. When the dust had cleared the whimpering man was lying on the ground in a ball crying and shaking.

“Before I crush your bones, what was the report of the scouts?” the triune voice speaking deeply.

“De-de-de reeport… oh, de reeport!! We have dem! Tree of de birds reetruned erleer. Dey are camped at de stones!”

“Good.” it came more as a rumble than a word, “Awaken the best Styx we have and prepare my chariot. Lurq, fail me a second time and you will wish I had given you a quick death today.”

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“Alright everyone. Gather round!” Called the Leader as he beckoned all the children together around the fallen stone upon which he stood. “Come on, make sure everyone is close enough to hear. Good, good. Alright, is that everyone?”

A female archer did a quick head count and gave a nod. The Leader did his best to smile patiently as he called for silence from the talking children. There were probably fifty or more children and it took a while. Finally with a loud whistle he got everyone’s attention.

“Alright! Now, I’m glad you’re all a bit more energetic because today were going to do exercises!”

There was a general groan that came up from the kids that had to be silence before he could continue.

“But not that kind of exercise. For the next two days we’ll be out here until its safe to go back to your villages.”

“Why isn’t it safe?” Called a small boy of about five.

“Because the evil armored lord is looking for us!” called an older boy.

“I heard he has wings like a bat and twelve arms and really really really big yellow eyes!” said another boy.

“Well I heard that long ago someone in the villages killed his son and now he wants to come and kill us in revenge!” cried another child.

“I heard he’s actually a wolf from the waist down!” Said a frightened girl.

“Will you stop all this stupid babbling!” yelled a pale faced boy with goggles in his black hair, “Those are all old wives tales! The lord who owns the lands our villages are built on needs servants and wants to take us. That’s why we have to hide. He’s no supernatural monster, just the regular human kind.”

The Leader chuckled and said, “Thank you…”

“Ivan of Janez. I’m the apprentice of Racha the Scholar.”

“Thank you Ivan. Now, as I was saying, today we’ll be practice emergency drills in case of an attack. Have you all been tested for your giftings?” He asked with a look of concern.

“Oh! Yes! My mommy says I’m the best daisy chain maker in the whole village!” called a girl from Matvie.

“I can throw rocks really far!” said a boy from Luca raising his hand.

Before another wave of talking could begin the Leader quickly interrupted while motioning to the female archer, “Alright, well those are all really good gifts but the ones I’m talking about are a little different. You are all probably still too young for your giftings to have manifested but hopefully we can coax them out.”

The children all just stared at him as if he was a lunatic and he gave a nervous laugh before motioning to the Archer to go ahead. She stepped forward and spoke in a deep sonorous voice, “Lets start from the beginning children. You all come from the four villages, between the mountains and the forest, on the grassy plains. That’s where we are right now. Each village has a special gifting that only they can do and everyone in the village can do the gifting more or less. Do you understand so far?”

There were a few confused faces but most of the messy heads of hair nodded yes. She was about to continue when a screech was heard in the distance. Several of the children began to tremble slightly while the rest looked fearfully into the mists. Nicholas who stood next to the Leader spoke hauntingly, “It’s them. The birds from my nightmare!”

Turning quickly he grabbed hold of Nicholas’ shoulders, “What birds!?! What did they look like!?! Speak quickly!!!”

“I-I dunno… birds like I’ve never seen before! Big black owls! With horns! And eyes…. eyes that looked like smoke was coming from them!” Nicholas said fearful at the kind Leaders’ sudden urgency.

“Styx!!! We’ve been found! Quick, forget the fire and the tents! We move now!” The Leader called to the rest of the guardians in their dark cloaks.

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The armored figure paced the ground pensively, reveling in the rush of fear and anxiety coming from the children and the guardians far away. The figure walked into one of the houses that seemed to have belonged to a scholar of some sort, half of it destroyed by the armored one’s mace. He reached his clawed gauntlet into a pile of parchment and pulled out a clean piece. As he began to write he spoke to himself,

“What will you do now that the children have been discovered, oh great leader? Will you risk the mountains? No, those cloaks of yours are strong but they cannot resist the mountain cold. That is my domain. The forest then? Ha, you fear those woods more than you fear me. You know what lurks in the shade of the ancient trees. So, you will try to hide in the sea of grass. That will be of no use if you cannot find your way. Hmm, time to repay an old enemy.”

On the parchment was written many strange block like characters and in the middle a name was printed. The figure walked to the still lit fire and lit the parchment. It burned quickly and the ashes danced upon the wind in the hand of the evil one. Then he blew them whispering an ancient word as they flew away fast.

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The children were running through the sea of long golden grass, the heavy white mist above them like a blanket. They pushed through in a single file line. The Leader and three other guardians were at the front while the rest of the guardians were scattered along the line urging the children on. As they ran breathlessly through the tall grass Nicholas had worked his way through the line near enough to hear the Leader and the other three talking.

“How did they find us, Sato? I thought you said we lost them yesterday!”

“It wasn’t Sato’s fault. We did loose them. They used a child to get near us.” Said the Archer fiercely, “Those monsters will stop at nothing. It was the little girl from Luca that cried so much. They followed her tears here.”

“Well is there another safe area Leland?” The Leader asked the third guardian who seemed to be really leading the line.

“Hmm. There is but it will take us through the pass.” he said cautiously.

“You know I don’t like the pass. Getting there we get too close to the forest.”

“It may be the only safe haven left for the children. If that monster finds them there’s no knowing what will happen to them.” the Archer said worriedly.

“Fine. Take us to the pass Leland.”

Then Nicholas heard Sato speak for the first time, “The mists. They are bad. A whisper. An echo. Something not right.”

The Leader looked concerned from Sato to Leland and then said in a hushed voice, “Leland why did you not sense this too?”

Leland looked blankly at the Leader and then the whole line was stopped as the Leader held up his hand. His eyes bore into Leland’s as he spoke softly, “Leland, does he know your name? Think hard.”

Leland seemed to think for a few seconds then his eyes grew with alarm as he spoke softly, “Oh no, you’re right! He does! Twelve years ago when we snuck into the fortress to steal the scrolls and I had to open the navigator’s door. It required my name!”

The Leader closed his eyes and Nicholas stepped forward asking worriedly, “What’s wrong? What’s going on?”

The Leader looked at Nicholas before he took a deep breath and spoke, “Our navigator has been compromised. The thing we are escaping from sent this mists. Here look.”

The Leader pulled a round metallic box from his pocket and flipped it open. The inside had a compass with a golden letter n at the top showing north. But the arrow was not stationary. It pointed to the right, then suddenly swung to the left, then after a few more moments it turned to the right again.

“Not just that, but any natural way of telling direction won’t work. The moss changes sides on stones, the sun and moon are blocked completely, even animals that migrate through here will get lost. That’s why we needed our navigator. But since he knows Leland’s name it means the creature must have blocked his senses and he’s no better than my compass.”

“So now what?” asked Nicholas looking hopefully to the others guardians, “There must be a way! Someway to get out of here!”

“Well, there is one way.” said Leland as his eyes scanned the children, “ How many children do we have from Janez?”

“About twelve,” said the Archer, “eight girls and four boys.”

“Hmm. Bring me the boys.” Leland said hopefully.

“Leland if you want to do what I think you want to do then we’re going to need time. And that’s something we don’t have!” Said the Leader still scanning the skies.

“Well, just need a few minutes. If even one of them has the gifting strong it can work!” Leland said defensively. “In the mean time, why don’t you get the children in the emergency drill patterns. Every second you buy me might get us out of the sea of grass and into the pass.”

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Twenty large black owls were flying low over the golden sea of grass barely visible through the thick heavy fog. Their smoking wings beat the air and their cries echoes like screams on the wind. They flew faster and faster as if their master was right behind them in full fury. The trail of tears had long since dried up but that did not matter. They could feel the fear of the children close by.

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The heaving fat man stepped off the boat and looked about. He began walking down the wharf when he heard the chillingly rustle of silk behind him. The sick cloyingly sweet voice behind him purred and scraped against his soul.

“Don’t even think about running. The last one that ran made such a mess when I had to suck his soul from his body in the middle of the market place. Just turn around slowly and walk with me.”

Stultius did as he was told and followed the figure in the scarlet red hooded cape through the busy market place. Somewhere deep in his mind he knew he had done it. He had made his decision and there was no turning back now. He gulped and tried not to think about the gnawing fear in the pit of his stomach.

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“Here they come!” cried the scouts as the edge of the group.

“Steady now.” said the Archer reassuringly to the children who were standing in a large circle. “Now, all of you, remember what I told you. How special all of you from Matvie are. Its very important that you not let go of each other’s hand. Even if you get scared don’t worry. You’ll be fine and I’ll be here to keep you safe.”

The children were scared but they nodded and gripped each other’s hands tightly. The Archer nodded and then looked at the smaller circle of Lucians inside the circle of the Matvians. Each guardian was close enough to keep an eye on the trembling children. And then within that circle was Leland with the boy from Janez who he had said had the gifting.

It was Ivan of Janez. He was visible shaken and was trying hard not to let it show. He played with the goggles in his hair as he listened to Leland’s instructions. The Archer close by nodded approvingly as she continued circling the Matvian children and watching the trembling ones from Luca.

Then the children from Luca all seemed to stop trembling and looked to the left. The Archer let three shafts fly towards the wall of fog as she kept walking forward. The next moment a large Styx broke threw the wall and was instantly slain by the three arrows. The Archer already had her bow notched again with one eye on the Lucian children who were trembling again.

Then the Lucians all looked up with fright and she spun around loosing more shafts upward. Another guardian did as well but five Styx had all broken through at once and only four of them were slain. The last one descended on the children with large black wings billowing and sharp iron talons ready.

It impacted the circle of children and enveloped them completely with dark smoke. Then the smoke dissolved into the air but the children were still fine. A few were scared and a few seemed to be ready to cry, but most seemed to be fine. The Archer ran up and reassured them all while watching the Lucians and glancing at Ivan and Leland.

“Now, you try. Which way?” Leland was saying.

“Hmmm. That way!”

“Very good. You’re ready. That small nudging you’ve always felt. That is the pull of the South Pole. Now, keep feeling it until it’s the biggest feeling in your body. Now turn so its over your left shoulder. Good.”

Several more Styx came out of the clouds and they were felled by well placed arrows. Another came towards the Matvian children but this time they stood their ground and as the bird was a handbreadth away, it seemed to hit an invisible wall and crumple into smoke and nothingness.

“Oh fearless Leader!” called Leland triumphantly, “We have our heading!”

“Good! Everyone move! Keep Ivan at the front and the Matvians at the back!”

The line headed out again and was on the move. Nicholas found himself at the back near the Matvians. He also saw Sahrina and Bella there. They were both walking briskly, Sahrina looking worriedly and Bella looking scared. Then suddenly Nicholas and several other Lucian children all looked to the left. Ten Styx flew at the children and nine were slain instantly by arrows. But the last one wasn’t and had caught its prize.

“Sahrina! Help me!”

“Bella!”

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In the ruined village the armored one suddenly jerked as if a bolt had stuck him. He staggered and groaned, then leaned back as he gave a roaring laugh and struck the ground several times with his mace.

“Hahaha! Yes! They did it! I’ve done it! The key is mine!”

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In the far off sea town, the crimson caped one stopped. She raised her hand as if she was trying to remember what she wanted to say. Then she turned and lowered her hood. He saw with amazement that she had a beautiful face, red lips, and green eyes, all framed by her rich auburn hair.

“You want to kiss me don’t you?”

He could only nod.

“You know its prohibited. You could be in so much danger.”

He didn’t seem able to understand the meaning of anything else at that moment. She leaned forward and placed her red lips on his. He felt like he was dissolving into the kiss, as if hundreds of tiny feathers were tickling against him. And then as he opened his eyes, she suddenly seemed shorter.

“Hmm. You’ll do fine.”

And with that she leapt up on his back, which was no a dappled grey color. He began walking forward and saw his hooves on the street. But for some reason it was all fine. He was fine because suddenly he didn’t need anything else in the world. All he could think of now was maybe getting a juicy carrot.

“We must make haste. If Oleander has found the key then our time is almost up!”

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Okay

so as you may ahve been able to tell, this story is slightly diffrent from the first. Don't worry, its actually working its way towards merging with the other version. In fact, at the end of chapter three I will be using large sections of my first and second chapters of the older version for the story....

Question though, I am thinking of going back to the original very first story, which had Laburnum as Queen of Alexandria and Alexi as her niece. Then the group has to overthrow Laburnum (who actually dies in that version). So, my question is, which do you prefer... or better yet, which do you think would be the better story?

Monday, December 1, 2008

Maggie's Song

As the three hikers walked along the brown dirt trail, they came to a large cliff face. They stood breathless for a few seconds, eyes scanning the world before them. Behind them the dark viridian canopy of the forest echoed peace, while before them the white cliffs descended in a sheer drop into the aquamarine oceans below. Large white clouds floated by like castles. The three hikers stood in awe as they drank from their water bottles. Then they heard it.

Faintly, softly, they heard the song. It was strong and sweet and ethereal. The voice was on the wind, coming from the cliffs around them. They couldn’t understand the words which sounded smooth and clear, like Gaelic. They walked on the path along the cliff’s side looking for the singer. Then they saw her, a woman dressed in black, stood on the cliff that jutted out the farthest. She was looking away from them, her long white hair blowing in the breeze.

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Back at the tavern of the small town, the people were laughing and singing as a rather large man played a jig on a pipe. The three hikers sat at a table in the corner and discussed the trail that day. An old man sitting close by heard them talking and commented.

“Oh, so you took the Arrowroot trail? That ‘uns a beauty! Did you happen to see Mad Mag?”

“You mean the old woman who was singing?” asked one.

“Oh, aye! Ol Mad Maggie McGuire is a sight ta see!”

“Be silent you loudmouth!” said another old man, with a rugged and tired face. “You don’t know what you’re talking about. Margret McGuire is not mad. She was simply madly in love.”

The other old man snorted and walked away to get more to drink as the three hikers leaned closer to hear as the man began speaking.

“It was a very long time ago, though for some of us it seems like it was simply yesterday…”

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The warm sun shone down on the green fields and pastures as three friends ran through the countryside. The green fields of the potato plants were fresh and clean smelling as the three continued running towards the old Arrowroot path that led to the cliffs. They ran through the forest but stopped at a stream to drink from the cool water.

“Angus! Stop that!” called the girl as she lay back listening to the stream.

“Awe come on Maggie! Its only a wee little splash!” The boy with the head of curly strawberry blind hair called, splashing more.

“I said stop!” Maggie called fiercely, “You better stop or you’ll be sorry! Bryan! Help me!”

The other boy with the dark hair laughed as he watched, pulling his fiddle out and beginning to play, “Only if you’ll give us a dance Maggie, me dear.”

She pretended to pout then got up. Bryan played a lively jig on his fiddle and she and Angus got up and began to dance in the clearing between the columns of trees. The stream seemed to serenade them as they twirled on the mossy grass and leaves. They laughed as they finished the dance falling on the ground.

“Alrighty then. Give us a song.” laughed Angus as he sat back.

“Oh, I dunno. Which one should I sing?” Maggie asked as she looked from one to the other.

“Sing about Scarborough Fair for us. About the parsley, and the sage, and the rosemary and thyme.” Bryan said getting his fiddle ready, “Here I’ll help.”

As the first note of the song rang out clear and true, she swayed slowly as she sang clearly and precisely. Her voice was soft and melodic and sweet, and Angus could only close his eyes as he listened in awe of her beautiful voice. Then as the song finished they all continued walking to the cliffs. There they lay back and watched the clouds.

Bryan began to play his fiddle, softly and smoothly, a melody that stirred the love in their young hearts. Maggie had not seen the wink that had passed between them. Then Angus stood her up and went down on one knee.

“Maggie O’Day. Will ya marry me? Please say yes, other wise I’ll have to throw myself down this cliff. But it would be better than living another day without you!”

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“He threw himself down the cliff?!?” asked one of the hikers.

“Oh no. They were married. And then the great war came. Like all strong young lads Angus and Bryan were sent to the front. They fought very valiantly too. Bryan was wounded in his leg. He still limps around to this very day.”

“But what about Maggie? Why is she on the cliffs?”

“I was getting to that. Patience. As I was saying…”

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After the great war was done, Angus returned to the village and he and Maggie were married. They bought the house on Breaker’s Point, and soon Maggie was great with child. Our people don’t like wasting time, ya ken. Anyway, Maggie gave birth to twins, a lad and lass all bonny and beautiful. Just like their mother. The McGuires began farming and received their first spuds from their good friend Bryan.

That summer was bountiful and Angus made some money by selling some of his cuttlings as seed for other potato farmers in the area. Those first years were the happiest time any of them had. The children grew up so fast in that time that soon they were helping their father plant the fields while their mother watched contently as her family worked from her kitchen door.

At night, Bryan would come to their farm and would sit by the fire, the children on his lap, and would tell them tales of all the places he had seen in the war. Then he would bring out his old fiddle and would play tunes until they were ready for sleep. And Angus would draw Maggie near and whisper to her.

“Maggie, give us a song. Sing of Scarborough Fair.”

And Maggie would sing like they had when they were all children as Bryan played. And Angus would look at his work worn hands and feel the soft happiness the music brought his heart. Then he would carry his children to their bed, their small hearts beating against his. And then he and Bryan would walk back to his home in the cool evening and speak of their days in the war and of comrades lost but never forgotten. But he returned home quickly, and would take his darling wife in his arms and simply stand there in the moonlight and let his heart speak to hers.

But in life, happiness is such a fragile fleeting thing. Recognize it, brush against it, simply breathe its name, and it shatters. And after five years of this wonderful life, the happiness too was broken, not just for them, but for us all. It was in the late summer, when Maggie was once more along with child and the fields were ripe and green when the blight came. In a day and a night all that they had worked so hard to build was destroyed.

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“Was that the great blight that went across the whole country?”

“Aye. The same. But in our small village it had a special curse. You see, we only grow potatoes and we’re so far and out of the way from any other villages that there was no way we could feed our children.”

“The great famine.”

“Aye.” was all the old man could say, years of age suddenly showing on his face. “Those who died, died terribly, but for those who survived it was much worse. No parent should ever have to burry a child. Never.”

Silence hung in the tavern as all had stopped to listen to the old man, some who knew him better removing their hats and looking down. The silence was deafening and seemed endless before he began speaking again.

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“What will we do?” asked Angus as he counted the last sacks of potato flour they had.

“We can forage in the forest.” Maggie said hopefully. “I’ve already taught the children how to find acorns and rosehips and mushrooms. We’ll be able to last till winter.”

“But what then? What will we do when winter comes and the forest is empty?” asked Bryan shaking his head.

“I can climb down to the sea and fish. It’ll be dangerous but I’ll manage.” said Angus taking one of the few metal nails they had and beginning to form it into a hook.

“I’ll ration our flour. We’ll make it. I know we will.” Maggie said smiling. “But what of you Bryan? You can’t climb down to the sea with your leg.”

“I’ll share my catch with you.” Angus said smiling, “if you promise to do the scaling.”

“Thank you friends. But I couldn’t. I would feel like I was taking the food out of their precious mouths.” He said motioning to the sleeping children.

“What will you do?”

“I will travel to Edinburg. From there I will find a way to get to America. I hear the blight did not reach there and that they are seeking workers. I can lay aside my fiddle for a while and work in a factory or maybe somewhere else.”

“Well then friend.” spoke Angus sadly, “until then, pick up your fiddle one more time and remind us of old time when things were sweet.”

“I could not sing of love or happiness tonight.” Maggie spoke softly.

“Then sing of the sea. It will save all of our lives very soon.” Angus said as he worked further on the hook.

And sing she did. She sang her song with a bittersweet smile as she remembered all the times that had been so happy and close and how they might never again have the joy they once had. And so Bryan left for America while the McGuires tried to survive.

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“What happened to Bryan?”

“Oh, he tried several jobs but his leg always caused him to lose them. He even worked on the large statue of a lady they were building in the bay for a while. But eventually his fiddle playing made him the most money. He would play in the snow in the large parks and avenues, his songs of the old emerald island and of home and loved ones. Any extra money he made he sent back to Angus and Maggie.”

“Wow, he was a really good friend.”

“Well, it was nothing really. He had only himself to take care of. Angus had Maggie and the three children to care for. Wouldn’t anyone have done the same in his place?”

There was silence as all thought of how they would have responded in Bryan’s position. The old man pulled out his pipe and lit it carefully before he continued with his tale.

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That first winter was rough. The fish were barely enough and the flour soon became rancid and infested by weevils. But they survived and by the time spring came they were ready to begin the work of planting again. But the blight was still in the soil and no plants would grow. The children still gathered whatever they could from the forest and Angus began setting traps at the base of the cliffs while he worked on the farm during the day. But it was useless. The farm had failed.

“Angus. What will we do? The money we have left from what Bryan sent us is barely enough to keep food on the table. Soon, something must change.” Maggie said wearily.

Angus held her close and whispered to her, “Take heart my love. The fish may not be biting anymore and the forest have been so depleted that they are dying, but we still have hope.”

“What hope?” Maggie asked as she buried her face in Angus’ shoulder crying.

He looked ahead and spoke with pain as he said, “There is always America.”

“What? No! We can’t leave our home.” Maggie said with fear.

“Not all of us. Just me. I can send the money I get back to you. The children know how to check the traps and set new ones. I spoke to Eric up the lane and he’s leaving too. He has a young boy too that could help with the farm. You and his wife would remain here and keep the farms going while we sent money for food. It would be just until the famine is over.”

This entire time Maggie had said nothing. She knew they had no other option but for Angus to leave was more than she could bare. Her heart felt like a small piece was dying. She simply held him closer and cried some more.

“There, there my love. It will not be long before we will see each other again.”

“When do you leave?”

“The day after tomorrow. But for now we are together.”

“Everyday, I will climb the arrowroot path to the cliffs and will sing you a song. Will you listen for it? Will you remember to look for it?”

“I will, my love. Every morning I will stop and wait for your song.”

“And every morning.” she spoke through tears, “I will sing you a song. I will sing of how the farm is green. I will sing of how the children have grown. I will sing of my love for you.”

“And I will sing back, even though it may sound like something dying, I don’t care. I will sing back to you. I will sing of the things I am seeing, of the people I meet and places I go and of how I miss you so much!”

“Everyday, until we see each other again.”

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“And they did.” said the old man softly.

“How would you know that though?” asked a skeptical hiker.

“Because lad, Angus went and stayed with Bryan. There he worked his hand as many things. But every morning he would wake Bryan with that racket of his, he called singing, afore he left for work.”

“Aye.” said an older woman nearby, “My family was the one who lived with the McGuires. I remember every morning we would wake up to the sound of an angel singing as Mrs. McGuire went to the cliffs to sing to the west.”

“True, true. And it was on one such morning that it happened…”

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Maggie stood upon the very edge of the cliff and closed her eyes, the strong winds pushing her hair, dress, and shawl back behind her. She imagined Angus, somewhere across the sea in a far away land also standing quietly like she was, waiting for the sunrise and the song.

And as Maggie McGuire stood there upon the very edge of the land, and as the sun breathed color into the morning sky she began to sing. She sang with all her might, with all her breathe. She sang letting her broken heart and weary soul spill forth into the coming day. She sang as loud as she could, so that every word of her heart would reach the distant shores and the heart of her love.

And as she stopped singing she closed her eyes again and imagined she could hear his song from across the waves. She imaged he was trying in vain to keep the melody of Scarborough Fair as he had done so many times. She smiled slightly and listened. And then very faintly, she heard it. A violin singing softly on the morning air. A fiddle playing Scarborough Fair.

Maggie’s eyes snapped open and looked down at the docks far below. There a small boat had pulled up. And standing on the dock beside all the passengers was Bryan, playing his fiddle. Her heart beamed and filled with unimaginable joy as she scanned the crowd for Angus. But she did not see him anywhere. As she watched with confusion she saw them bring three black caskets off of the ship. And suddenly all joy drained from her face.

Maggie ran down the path, through the forest where they had danced, past the home they had built and through the town they loved. She ran and tears ran down her face as she ran. Her heart was breaking, her soul felt torn from within her. As she came to the docks she ran up to Bryan and threw herself against him, sobbing violently. She beat her fist against his chest as she cried out loudly.

Bryan had dropped his fiddle and was saying her name…

“You mean he died!?!” said a hiker.

“Stop interrupting! Now as I was saying, she was crying when she looked up at Bryan’s surprised face…

“Bryan! What happened? Where is Angus?”

But before he could begin to speak she heard a distant voice. It sounded like a man singing. Or trying to at least. He was horribly off key. She spun around and looked towards the town, then the house, then the forest. And then she saw him. He was standing on the very edge of the cliff, where she had stood so many times, singing of his love for her.

She turned and ran to him, and he did too. They both ran with all their might, every cell in their bodies willing them on faster and faster. Forest and village passed in a blur as they met at the stream. She threw herself in his arms and he spun her around as she cried and laughed all at the same time. He kissed her long and hard and then they both fell back into the water.

“Angus! Angus, you’re home! Oh! I thought when I saw the coffins….”

“Shh. Shh. Its okay love. I’m back now. I’m home. And I’ll never leave again.”

As they kissed again, there in the running stream, the children came running up too, crying for their father. They threw themselves upon him and the family sat there soaked in the stream, as they all laughed and splashed, feeling the weariness and sadness of all the years of hardship washing off of them.

“But, how do you know all this?” asked the hiker.

“Because, I came up behind them, and began playing my fiddle again as I had all those many times before. And they danced there in the stream with the sun shining down on them. Ah, to have been there in that moment. That was the thing dreams are made of.”

“You mean you’re…”

“I’ve always been who I’ve always been. And now you see why Maggie sings.”

“But if Angus came back why is she still singing?”

“Well, many years and children and grandchildren later, Angus became ill. And as he lay there upon his deathbed, he and Maggie spoke, as they had so many years before:

‘There, there my love. It will not be long before we will see each other again.’ He had said.

‘When do you leave?’

‘The day after tomorrow. But for now we are together.’

‘Everyday, I will climb the arrowroot path to the cliffs and will sing you a song. Will you listen for it? Will you remember to look for it?’

‘I will, my love. Every morning I will stop and wait for your song.’

‘And every morning.’ she spoke through tears, ‘I will sing you a song. I will sing of how the land is green. I will sing of how the grandchildren have grown. I will sing of my love for you.’

‘I will sing back to you. I will sing of the things I am seeing, of the people I meet and places I go and of how I miss you so much!’

‘Everyday. Until we are together again.’

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That night, the hikers had heard a commotion in the village. They had awoken to see villagers in boats looking urgently in the cold waters at the foot of the cliffs. And as they looked they saw Old Bryan walk up to the spot where his two best friends had stood and begin to play the old tune as the large white moon appeared behind the clouds behind him.